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The heart, is an origami fold.
Emotions spooling miles of thread
Dangle me from:
                        The apex of a leaf [with a thousand veins to spare]
                        Half a moon          [still flooding oceans not with tungsten spots]
                        Window panes      [broken of its glass holding together dirty fingerprints]
           &
                        strips of sky          [cold but easy on my lips]

I split.
Becoming twins:
One to take my pulse!
Roots coagulate,
Thickening my plot.
As the earth clots,
                         Dig..
A mole(cule) that makes mountains.

21 years a single leaf fell making me
a fool covered in foliage.
I’ve fallen from
                     Trees
                            Grace
                                    Clouds
                                           &  High wooden beds
                                           as my hair fell from my                                   
                                                                           scalp
                                                              

El divine complex has ripped
Off my heavy wings
like a used car sale..
         Entering
                   The
                      Troposphere
I became slightly bored..
                      Then solid ground!
                    My heart beats 3 times louder
                  Than any fell tree in a wood

(With no one around)

This is how..
..The heart, folds.
ah.
poem and a drawing.
experimental.
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:iconjennelizabeth:
Jennelizabeth Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2008
LOVE this > <
deep and meaningful.
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NSH Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2008  Professional Photographer
thank you :heart:
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megandurnford Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2006
This is very deep and acually quiet amazing
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NSH Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2007  Professional Photographer
thank you very much
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DrowningByWords Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2006  Professional Writer
wow so beautiful, powerful and effective
love the structure goregoues imagery :+favlove:
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NSH Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2007  Professional Photographer
Thank you :heart:
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DrowningByWords Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2007  Professional Writer
you're sincerely welcome =)
:heart:
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somnomollior Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2006   Writer
Very beautiful. I wish I dared be so experimental. Often when I have read other poems that purport to be experimental they just seem to be going through the motions strange line breaks, brackets everywhere, but yours have a purpose and add to the meaning and mood of the poem.
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NSH Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2007  Professional Photographer
thank you hun
dont be afraid to experiment
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