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Like fistfuls of red
Eaten alive
She borrowed knives from wolves
To accessorize with her own
Sheep’s clothing.

Sat on heights
Before I became wild fire…
                         But as I settled as ash...
There was no phoenix to
Fill my day.

I March,
(An army that reeked of February 2006)
Powerful guns that owned
                                    Men who had strength
That wasn’t their own.
…They were pumped with fear
                                      And brew
      That made them feel
         6
   inches harder.

Our master plan was
To escape to an island,
          Alone

And here I am;
Alone on an island,
With a War(I)saw from afar…

                      And a gun I withdraw
                              Which I sometimes call talk.
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Allusions and wordplay make fistful of fight by *NSH a red hot winner. ( Suggested by `PinkyMcCoversong and Featured by `coshdaddy )
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It's never the same without the spacing and typography. Here, you've got ambivalent phrasing all over the place that reads different if you just move around some punctuation. Very creative, startling imagery and excellent metaphor. Well done.
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:iconnsh:
thank you so much thank you dear..
:heart:
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:iconharlequinlover:
i like this.
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:iconnsh:
Thank you
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~esopoemface Apr 14, 2006  Student Writer
poignant
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:iconnsh:
Thank you so much
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*innocent-rebel Apr 14, 2006   General Artist
wwo. thats a beautiful and emotional picture. i like it very much!
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*LDFranklin Apr 14, 2006  Hobbyist Photographer
Awesome poem!!! Congrats on the DD!
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:iconnsh:
Thank you :heart:
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