Like fistfuls of red
Eaten alive
She borrowed knives from wolves
To accessorize with her own
Sheep’s clothing.
Sat on heights
Before I became wild fire…
But as I settled as ash...
There was no phoenix to
Fill my day.
I March,
(An army that reeked of February 2006)
Powerful guns that owned
Men who had strength
That wasn’t their own.
…They were pumped with fear
And brew
That made them feel
6
inches harder.
Our master plan was
To escape to an island,
Alone
And here I am;
Alone on an island,
With a War(I)saw from afar…
It's never the same without the spacing and typography. Here, you've got ambivalent phrasing all over the place that reads different if you just move around some punctuation. Very creative, startling imagery and excellent metaphor. Well done.
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